battle

[burnunit]

stink with me
you naive boys
we'll run together
and no one
but no one
can flag us down

Comments

[djnoise.livejournal.com]

I'm going to assume that that's just an amusing typo, otherwise the tone of this becomes something else entirely.

no

[burnunit.livejournal.com]

no, no typos, I read it carefully before I posted it and every word is chosen carefully. I even double checked the one word I was uncertain about, "naive", in my giant New Lexicon Webster's Dictionary of the English Language, Encyclopedic Edition, published in 1989; the one with the 1150 pages laid out with 3 columns of words per page. There must be like 50,000 words in it and it makes a very impressive clunking noise.

Re: no

[djnoise.livejournal.com]

So "stink with me" is deliberate? I... um... don't know what to make of that, exactly.

Re: no

[burnunit.livejournal.com]

oh, yeah, stink was the right word. precisely because of that reaction.
but also, stink is a really loaded word.