Sorry, I'm going to get a little analytical on the comedy so bear with me...
I felt this bit really fell flat. After the initial reaction to the juxtaposition of the racists being the target of discrimination, they just play the same card over again but it really doesn't go anywhere. They don't build to anything more, no effective comic heightening.
By contrast, I think this bit plays off the stereotypes of racism far more effectively:
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Date: 2008-12-01 04:52 pm (UTC)On the other hand, well, that's not really going to solve the problem of them feeling persecuted.
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Date: 2008-12-02 04:44 am (UTC)I felt this bit really fell flat. After the initial reaction to the juxtaposition of the racists being the target of discrimination, they just play the same card over again but it really doesn't go anywhere. They don't build to anything more, no effective comic heightening.
By contrast, I think this bit plays off the stereotypes of racism far more effectively: